Thursday, January 31, 2008

The Writing Process is Messy

As I promised yesterday, I wanted to post on how the writing process is messier than the prewriting, drafting, revision, proofreading, and review rubrics may make it seem at first glance. As I noted in the last post, the theory of process writing was developed out of the process taught by Greek and Roman rhetoricians to would be rhetors--that is, those who wanted to learn to use rhetoric. As it came into being in the 1970s and 1980s, process writing was seen as the panacea for all writing ills. While it can help you solve a host of writing problems and improve the efficiency of your writing process, it turned out that few writers actually follow the step-by-step process folks were taught to teach. This is especially true of successful, professional writers.

When folks began actually studying the processes used by profession writers, here's what we found:

1) Professional writers write regularly, usually on a daily basis. They set up a schedule to write and usually try to go for production of a set number of publishable words per day. Often, they draft for one to two hours a day, and they reserve the rest of their time for other aspects of the writing process. Indeed, many writers will get antsy if they don't follow their writing schedule.

2) Professional writers consider the most difficult aspect of the writing process the drafting stage. When they set up a writing schedule, they reserve their most productive time--my time is early in the morning, but many folks draft best late at night--for getting words on paper. When they do this work many strive to find a time will little or no distraction. I know more than a few blog writers, for instance, who draft early in the morning before spouses and kids wake up.

3) Professional writers spend a lot of time on revision, but their final prose is often governed by the prose they write during the drafting stage. In other words, they often revise and even proofread during the drafting stage. That is, as they find themselves stuck, some writers will move on from the section where they are stuck to a section of a text with which they feel more confident. Some writers will get stuck and move into review of what they've already written as a means of getting further ideas; and, as they move through what they've written, they'll often take the time to spell or grammar check. In any event, the movement from drafting, to getting stuck, to review or revision, and then back to the section on which they are stuck is part of a set, conscious process which is followed with almost a religious fervor.

4) Many of new ideas "flow" from areas already written, and many writers will start or end a writing session by reviewing (re-reading) what they have just written. Often this review dredges up new ideas to add into the writing.

5) Professional writers aren't afraid to cut. One motto which comes up again and again is: "The most powerful end of the pencil isn't the lead; it's the eraser."

6) Another motto which one hears again and again is: "Good writing is re-writing." However, this rewriting is usually set into a session at a time different from drafting.

6) Professional writers aren't afraid to move text around. If a section of a text isn't "working" where it is, writers often cut, paste, and smooth out the transitions rather than discard. They look for opportunities to improve their text by moving a section or by incorporating a section written for another project.

7) Professional writers try to have a plan for each writing session. They end one day's writing session with a review and try make a plan for where they'll start the next session. Most write down where they'll start. Some don't. In either case, they're trying to limit the time spent fumbling for a starting point.

8) Professional writers schedule in specific times (sessions) for research, blocking out new projects (texts), and playing with angles and different approaches. They will do the same for proofreading, but often they don't schedule different sessions for revision, considering revision part of the drafting stage.

9) Professional writers write, and they know how they write. They study how others write, and they work to pick up tricks to make their own process easier. This sounds trite, but one of the things which was found when folks began studying how successful writers write is that successful writers don't by necessity like writing, but they do write regularly and often and in various genres. They practice the craft.

10) Professional writers let their subconscious do work for them. Rather than trying to force a creative session, many successful writers will often just move on to another aspect of the writing process and let their sub-conscious work on the problem which has them stuck. They'll schedule enough time that they can sleep on a problem, let their subconscious come up with a solution, and implement the solution in the next writing session.

11) Most professional writers keep several projects going at once, and they move between these projects as they get stuck on one.

Student writers can learn a lot about process from these "post process" studies of successful writers. Think about the following hints:

1) Pay attention to your own writing process. Learn how you write and develop a process which plays to your streghts.
2) Break large writing projects down into smaller writing sessions. In doing your WPA outcomes inventory, for example, you'll be writing and revising on a regular basis, but you'll be paying attention to writing on individual bullets. Over the course, you'll end up writing a tremendous amount, and the writing will be pretty solid. Why? Because you'll have thought about, revised, and proofread each bullet several times. This same process will work for your senior portfolio, the one which will help you get a job.
3) Figure out when you're at your most productive, and schedule drafting of new material for your most productive and creative.
4) At the end of each writing session, review what you've done and figure out a specific job for the next session.
5) Keep your writing sessions short. Rather than try to finish a paper in one evening, start earlier and give yourself the chance to work in one and two hour increments.
6) If you start earlier and write in shorter sessions, you can give your unconscious a chance to do much of the creative work for you; but, you have to allow time for such incubation to work.
7) Focus on one aspect of writing at a time. Recent work on productivity has proven that multitasking results in less and worse work than does uni-tasking. I'm firmly convinced, though I don't have the research to back it up, that writer's block, particularly among students, comes from trying to cram too many of the steps of writing into drafting.

Finally, I wanted to take a moment and point out how many of the things we found out about successful writers apply to other folks who create a given product on a regular basis. Many of you program, design games, implement network security protocols, etc., and you can speak to how productive work in these area carry over (or doesn't) into your own experience. I encourage you to start a thread on the Q&A where you can discuss how you write, work, and maintain productivity.

3 comments:

Tom de Mayo said...

I suppose I will post something until I get too busy not to...

I find that I have two writing modes: academic and creative. They have different needs and even times of day when I'm best at them.

For academic writing, I find I work best right after I've woken up, right after lunch or right after dinner. In other words, right after some kind of major day transition. If I sit around talking after dinner, or bum around in the morning, or whatever, that often kills my energy. Academic writing is the style that requires the most effort on my part, and the one that most often leaves me stuck staring at the page.

I find that for academic writing I must spend a great deal of time thinking about what I want to write and developing my ideas. I often compose in my head as I'm walking around, or as I'm doing some other activiy, like sketching or listening to music.

I can try to force a draft out in a number of ways. (For me, writing is like taking a crap - sometimes I can force things out before thier time, but when the ideas are ready to go, I can't really stop them.) I often write a semi-outing, trying to formulate a thesis statement and a topic sentence for each paragraph. Just that, and blanks paces between. If I have ideas or quotes I want to use or whatever, I stick them into the outline.

Then I go through the outline filling it out. I usually do primary source quotes last, even though I may pick them out first. I tend to carry a file of possible quotes in my head.

Last of all, I will polish, add footnotes, correct quotations, etc.

Just for the record, my method of writing drove my dissertation advisor absolutely bonkers. He did the opposite - He would start with carrefully chosen quotes and then fillin the ideas around them. He put a high emphasis on the polish of every sentence.

So I would send him drafts, sometimes with notes like [insert quote here] in it, asking him to comment on the flow of ideas. And he would tell me my phrasing was awkward.

Everyone programs their grey matter differently.

Writing is also almost like a trance state for me. I always have music on. Sometimes I have a distraction (like Wow) or a web browswer in the back, and flip windows. Or I have a book in my lap. Or two books, one I'm using as a source, and one that's fiction. (I have some really strange habits - don't try this at home, kids.) If I'm stuck or just warming up, the other window distracts me from whatever anxiety I'm having in the writing. Once I get going, its the other way around. Sometimes I flip back to Wow and find my character is a) dead and b) timed out.

Creative writing is completely different. When I write fiction, I don't begin until I have enough ideas and the story feels ready to begin. Fiction is an act not of conceptualization, but of visualizaton. It's like I have a little window into my story and I write down what I see. (Not that I don't think about theme and plot and what's going to happen next - but I do that when I'm not at the computer, usually.) I may massage the words, so what I see is said in the best way possible, but it's a very Delphic process - the voice of the Python is the voice of the God, not the voice of the human.

Unlike, academinc writing, which I must carefully plot out, and which I do best in the day - my academic mind shuts down about 9pm - I write fiction best a night, and really after my usual bedtime. That's one reason, I don't do it as much as I should -- RL keeps interfering.

Fiction writing is even more about the trance state than academic writing. The actual speed of typing, the tempo of my music, and the bio-chemical rush (adrenaline? endorphins?) all combine. Sometimes I realize about an hour later, that I've set one song on repeat, and have been listening (or not listening) to it over and over and over, following its rythm. I almost never experience a similar rush in academic writing.

Tom

Steve Brandon said...

Tom,

Many teachers, in English and out, find commenting on surface level issues easier than commenting on content; so, your dissertation director is far, far from alone.

As you say, each of our gray matter works differently, and getting to the point of writing well is a matter of much practice and using the practice to figure out what tricks and techniques work for you. Like you, I can get into a kind of Zen state when I write.

By the way, if you find yourself in need of some metal prunes, you know to speed up the process, try some of the various techniques, like free writing, brainstorming, listing, questioning, or mind mapping discussed in the text. These often loosen up the flow quite nicely.

When I advise students (and that includes my dissertation students), I usually advise them to use one of the techniques above, and then write on the ideas for which they are most ready or most excited to write. Often, writing on these subjects will lead to connections developing or being discovered as they write, which in turn makes them more ready to write in other areas.

Bobbie Ehrhardt said...

Dear Dr. de Mayo and HDP Steve,

Getting started, or restarted if you have left the work and need to go back and finish, is in my opinion the hardest part of the writing process. Like you both mentioned, once I get going, I also find it's zen, hawt, totally awesome or insert favorite colloquialism here! I believe it is having to go at that cold start that gets to many of us, particularly the ones who do not write professionally or regularly. So this makes it important to gain access to all the grab bag of tricks to get yourself moving; be it listing, brainstorming, mindmapping, etc. Or, for some people it may work better to find an extraneous stimulation such as music. The essence here is to find out what process works best for you and in what situations. Awareness, self-awareness is key. Pay attention to your life!

Bobbie